Colder than snow

Not happy with this at all
This is before the shading: [link]

I managed to ruin her face and everything totally when I shaded it... Just so you know she is ment to be colorless, shes a sort of ghost, someone who got lost in the mountains I guss... The cold colors (to me) representate how she feels, all alone in a dark and cold world...

Background are watercolor, and the white(snow) is white acryllic paint... The girl is shaded with regualr hb pencils...

No crit please, know it has a lot mistakes (and btw I totally ruined her eyes xD, look at the before shading version, for how they were supposed to look )